Seems you have a spot of posting trouble: - I get a broken link.

Which is a pity; it's a nice drawing. I really like the way you shade - 6/10

Fair rendering technique all right. Somewhat inconsistent, though: the man's head looks pretty flat compared to some other parts, which makes bits of the image look solid and other bits look like applique. More consistency in form definition should be nice here.

Very nice mate, getting your moneysworth out of Bic again ? The dwarf seems very familiar though. Does he have a high elf mage friend ?

I like the upper side of your artwork, but the chest and the hair looks flat compared to others. The legs are very strange. Keep posting

Thanks for the comments everyone.
About the hair: I left the hair to shade it at the end, but I liked the effect and I decided not to finish it. I was quite tempted to leave it with pencil. But I agree the drawing could look better with more work on it.
About the proportions: He is a Dwarf, not a human. The wierdness on the proportions here is intentional. He has really broad legs, small arms but long fore arms and big hands. That's how I imagine a dwarf anyway. Now, he is turning to his left, trying to aim a target with his pistol while drawing his dagger with the right hand... and losing balance. Don't forget he is just been ambushed! hehe. Fancy movement if you like, quite tricky to build aswell without a model. Definitely I'll have to expend more time the next time I decide to make an unusual movement like this. Again, thanks all for the feedback. And keep it coming! Cheers

good good+6